In Writing 2 class
before, I got score that I did not expect. I got score C. Then, I retake this course
again in short term semester. I really want to get score A in this class now.
Because of that, I have to do some efforts to get score A.
First of all, I will
increase my vocabulary in order to make better sentences. Whenever I find
difficult words, I will consult my dictionary to know their meanings. Then, I
will write them down on a notebook. After that, I will read and memorize them
every day. Furthermore, I will put some words in a piece of a big paper. Next,
I will stick them on my room’s wall.
Second, I will learn
about grammar by myself. Then, I will ask the lecturer to get more
understanding about grammar. Not only from lecturers, but I also can learn
about grammar from my friends. I may also ask friends who good at grammar are.
Third, I will discuss
my writing with my friends in the classroom and also outside the classroom. I
will ask them to give comments about my writing. Then, I will learn from the comments
of my writing. I will consider about my friends’ comments about my writing and
then I will make a new revision of my writing based their comments.
Last but not least, I
will also read more books or articles to get more knowledge and ideas to
improve my writing skill. I can also have more ideas to choose an interesting
topic before writing. Choosing an interesting topic will make others want to
read my writing well.
In summary, I will try
to do all the efforts above in order to get score A in Writing 2. For example,
by increasing my vocabulary, learning more about the grammar, discussing my
writing with friends, and reading more books and articles.
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